To make the blog as good as possible, remember to add punctuation:
hi mrs martin I love your writing especially the part where he found the secret door it was exciting from mr mccann
Can you spot all the mistakes?
Hi Mrs Martin, I love your writing, especially the part where he found the secret door. It was very exciting! From Mr McCann
Good bits & targets
Also remember to say something positive (this is always next to a smiley face in our books) and something they can improve on (target in the books).
Well done Mrs Martin! I really liked your description of the fantasy setting. I particularly liked how you used a similes to say ‘as dark as the night sky’. Target: Try to group your writing into paragraphs. From Mr McCann
If you are adding work to the blog, don’t add smileys. If you are commenting on someone’s writing, then smileys are great to show people what you think of their writing! Remember, only use one smiley for each comment.
Hi Miss Malloch. I love your writing, especially the part where he found the secret door. It was very exciting! From Mr McCann
Finally, here’s a table to show you all of the different smileys that you can make.
I hope your find all of this information useful.
From Mr McCann